one or two were dropped/misplaced. here’s one.
mind-controlled grassroots activist survivor struggles through mud and thorns to reach well-respected psionic weaponry corp
mind-controlled grassroots activist survivor (gasping, urgent, bleeding, wheezing, dripping mud): “i have to speak to traffic boss.”
rebel worker 2 takes mcgas to the hyperprison and opens the door
mind-controlled grassroots activist survivor (to rebel worker 2): “thank you so, so much”
mind-controlled grassroots activist survivor enters the hyperprison through the door
mind-controlled grassroots activist survivor: “traffick boss!”
(some disruption writing :s slow to write, could be seen as bearing controversy)
traffick boss looks up from a tic-tac-toe board with a cigar on it, to mind-controlled grassroots activist survivor, who approaches
mind-controlled grassroots activist survivor gets on his knees before the cigar on the tictactoe board and traffick boss, and puts one hand inside the other in an intensely beseeching pose.
mcgas is covered in wounds with ripped clothes from thornbushes. shards of broken glass are seen here or there near their feet.
mcgas: “traffick boss, i am so sorry i ratted on you.”
traffick boss looks at mind-controlled grassroots activist survivor. a small pause.
mind-controlled grassroots activist survivor: “i am so sorry that i spent time in my life not seeing your atrocities as blessed gifts to the world”
traffick boss looks at mind-controlled grassroots activist survivor for another small pause.
mind-controlled gr— 1716
some thoughts on doing a different take where the mind control victim with prolonged distance instead goes to rebel worker 2. to spinoffs to think instead